I have made “Inconstant Moon” as perfect as possible.

Yet I realize there is a reasonable probability that there will be things I have missed. After all, even mainstream published novels complete with editorial departments and teams of proof readers have been known to miss things. Or continuity errors, like the whopper I caught just before the final upload. But I’m not planning on pulling it and making corrections constantly as they come to light, since it wouldn’t be particularly efficient. I’ve decided instead to make note of any imperfections, and when there’s a big enough pile, I will make the corrections and issue a Second Edition.

Clearly, spoilers will be allowed here. Although you are welcome to send me email if you prefer.

So if you should find any such errors, please comment them here. I plan to reward anyone who does me this service by listing you in a new page of acknowledgments in the Second Edition.